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Monday, January 24, 2011

Present day Ireland

      At 17 Fredy isnt going very far, a dirty blond woorking on his farm driving a beat up 70 chevelle working to put food on the table every night. He goes to Groundhogs High and doesnt exactly fit in with anyone. His best freind Danny is alot more popular than him and acts alot different around his Freinds. Little does he know that his best freind has just been asked to join the ISS (Ireland Secret Service) and is going to be sent to baghdad to acoplish his first mission and the hardest thing he has ever done in his life
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6 comments:

  1. Christine CharbonneauJanuary 26, 2011 at 10:31 AM

    Thanks for posting, Alex! Is it Danny or Fredy that's been asked to join ISS? Why Baghdad? Looking forward to it!

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  2. ben jJanuary 26, 2011 at 12:24 PM

    Alex,
    That whole ISS thing randomly hit me in your summary but i kind of liked it. Does going to the ISS make his life better or worse? Is this something he wants because he is sort of and outcast? Really like the detail in the summary made me want to read it.
    Ben

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  3. portia moesingerJanuary 26, 2011 at 12:53 PM

    Alex,
    why is he working to put food on the table, did his father die,is the sick? sounds interesting :]

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  4. MarcD.January 27, 2011 at 3:32 PM

    Alex, I like the whole " spy " concept, but what is the "dirty blond putting food on the table" part of the story?

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  5. alexmacFebruary 3, 2011 at 4:18 PM

    Nice job portia I wrote that so that the reader would infer that his dad is dead,His mom has lost her job so the family rellys on Fredys paycheck for daily expenses

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  6. alexmacFebruary 3, 2011 at 4:29 PM

    Christine
    Hi, Fredy is the one who is being sent to baghdad by the iss not his best freind danny

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